Excellent photography and excellent choice of models. However font seems 'Ameteurish' and the front page seems slightly cluttered. But this can be fixed by the slight change of structure. The contents page is good, however it does need a bit more colour and could use a cleaer structured as everything seems slightly messy. But other than that everything else is brilliance. :)
Your photography looks really good especially the studio ones. You have a variety of images which is great. Your cover looks good but seems abit messy like you have put too much on. I think you need to change the structure of the contents - there seem to be alot of gaps.
Your photography looks good cause the shots are clear and the quality looks good however some of the shots look abit dark but it still does look profressional. You could have added alot more cover lines on your front page but i liked the range of shots used in your contents page. The contents page looks ait bland and plain at the moment you could have added more writing to it. I dont know what the colour scheme is so you need to work that out.
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Excellent photography and excellent choice of models. However font seems 'Ameteurish' and the front page seems slightly cluttered. But this can be fixed by the slight change of structure. The contents page is good, however it does need a bit more colour and could use a cleaer structured as everything seems slightly messy. But other than that everything else is brilliance. :)
ReplyDeleteYour photography looks really good especially the studio ones. You have a variety of images which is great. Your cover looks good but seems abit messy like you have put too much on. I think you need to change the structure of the contents - there seem to be alot of gaps.
ReplyDeleteYour photography looks good cause the shots are clear and the quality looks good however some of the shots look abit dark but it still does look profressional. You could have added alot more cover lines on your front page but i liked the range of shots used in your contents page. The contents page looks ait bland and plain at the moment you could have added more writing to it. I dont know what the colour scheme is so you need to work that out.
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